Lady Pirate

Sorry taking it down

Welcome to YWS!!! I'm glad you found us on the web!!! LP

Yes, I do always have French Club, which is probably a bad thing that I forgot seeing as I am the co-president and all. :oops: I really like magic study, ...

Thanks you guys for taking the time to read. I know it's sort of long! :) But I felt it would mess up the flow to break up the Chapter ...

Yeah, I'm pretty much done though. We go back from a week in Jan...after christmas...and then no more French. ...But I'll always have YWS! :D LP

No online translation, just this French 3 student blubbling through it. :) Thanks for the help xhalcyonx! :) LP

For Chapter Two:

Sorry, taking it down

Thanks! I"m going to post Chapter Two after this, now that the first of our two part Christmas is over. And I can sit and vegetate for a while, and ...

Normally, I'm a stickler and don't really like people messing with other pwople's work...*shrugs* I don't know why, I just do. I really like Twilight, and I think in this ...

Taking down story sorry

No, your fine. Thank you for looking over the peice. ONe thing that I feel I should make clear, is that it really isn't a dream that she's having, it's ...

You need to go back and look at the grammer, your missing some commas, and some other things. This little bit is intresting, but I'm not getting a real sense ...

This is really good, I love your wit

I really, really like this. The last line really got me.